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The colors are bright
shiny bright
in the afternoon, nearly night
where the shadows are floating
along with the clothing
known as the colors

the trees are soothing
happy to feel the wind
to rest and see
the colors

the ground is shaking
dancing in the colors
and the shadows
and happy following
the passenger
of the ground

the sky is moving
moving with the clouds
moving along
dancing along
and the sight
becomes more than that
with the clouds
the sky
the ground
the trees
the shadows
and the colors.
Something I thought about after seeing [link] 's [link]
I think this may fit your tastes. Enjoy!
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Flakchen Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That's really really good~ :D i'm proud of you. :3
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DarkMatery Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks.^^
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Flakchen Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Welcome ^^
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DarkMatery Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:D
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liveoncedietwice Featured By Owner Sep 8, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I would like to include this poem in my book
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DarkMatery Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
You may.
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RichardFeynman Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2011
Love it. I love the cadence and how it flows.
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DarkMatery Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you.:)
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lcipher42 Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2010  Professional General Artist
This sounds like what I get camping on acid. Well done!
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DarkMatery Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
"What I get camping on acid"? Thanks!:)
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